Sometimes, when I read a first person narrative, I'm reminded of my philosophy class in college.
It was the only class I ever fell asleep in. More than once I awoke with a jerk and realized I'd drooled on my notebook.  But the class was so boring!  All everyone did was talktalktalk about other people's thoughtsthoughtsthoughts.  I needed some action.
Often, first person POV easily becomes too introspective.  It's not fun to read about someone's thoughts all the time.  Inject action!
Journal: Write a scene from first person point of view.  Have your narrator observing something.  Be sure to inject action and/or dialogue elements to prevent the scene from being blah. For fun, remember that first person POV can be biased.
 
 
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